Saturday, January 31, 2015

Opposite Diamante Poem

Left-brain
Logical, objective
Controlling, practicing, knowing
Science, realistic – Art, imagination
Dreaming, feeling, believing
Creative, subjective
Right-brain

Metaphor Poem

My life is terms of do-re-mi
My body is rhythm guitar
My soul is a melodic guitar
My heart is a beat of drum
My life is music

Crazy thing I did.

“Now I sit all alone wishing all my feeling was gone. I gave my best to you. Nothing for me to do. But I have one last cry.” – Brian McKnight – ‘One Last Cry’

Now, I’m listening to this song. Mostly, people cry when they listen to this song (if they in the ‘down’ mood).
And now, I’m in that ‘down’ mood, but I don’t know why I cannot cry. It’s really painful when we are sad and can’t dry our tears, but our heart is crying.
I know it's crazy. I do a lot of crazy thing, but this is crazier than I expected. It's different when we enter into something that you can't even talk about it. Well, I don't even know what I'm going to do. I wish this 'something' is not real. Really... 




Maybe falling in love is the craziest thing I did..


JSM

Monday, January 26, 2015

"I am" Poem 2

I am your favorite song
I wonder what your genre is
I hear you on the radio
I see you sing the song
I want to complete your missing lyrics
I am your favorite song

I pretend to not believe it
I feel every word you sing
I touch every terms of do-re-mi
I worry if you change your single note
I cry if you out of the tune
I am your favorite song


I understand the song you sing
I say I’m your right key
I dream to be a good tone
I try to be a sweet harmony
I hope I’ll be your melody
I am your favorite song

JSM

Inspired by Camp Rock 'My Favorite Songs'

Wednesday, January 21, 2015

"I am" Poem

I am a girl who had nothing
I wonder how my friend’s react if I die
I hear them crying
I see them sad
I want to hug them for the last time
I am a girl who had nothing

I pretend to smile
I feel broke inside
I touch with my transparent hand
I worry of the death
I cry for the last time
I am a girl who had nothing

I understand what the death’s like
I say the death is good, wonderful
I dream I can see them again someday
I try to smile for the last time
I hope they’re OK
I am a girl who had nothing

JSM

Acrostic Poem

This is my first poem (for Basic Creative Writing course actually :-p)

Just an ordinary daughter who trying to
Understand this complicated world.
Sometimes good, sometimes bad.
Trying to be the best daughter, because
I only had my mother.
Never underestimate me, because
E is not in my dictionary

JSM

Friday, January 16, 2015

Have you ever...

Have you ever feel something strange feeling that suddenly tears roll down your face, and you just don’t know what happen with you? And you only want to hear sad song, and sitting in the silence, alone, staring nothing? I feel… I don’t know. Maybe, empty? I can’t say anything inside my head... or heart. I can’t express this feeling. I really want to cry, really. God, what’s actually happen to me? These tears keep tearing my face. I can’t stop it. God, please, stop it.

Untitled Poem

Too much tear in my eyes.
How can I hope to wipe them with happiness?

Too much wound in my heart.
How can I hope to heal them with good memories?

Too much pain in my life.

How can I hope to survive with a real smile?
Bloody Knife